Personal History Statement个人历史陈述写作指南

留学文书我们绝大部分同学都应该知道，但是除了已知的PS和SOP以外，还有另一种形式，PHS（Personal History Statement），有些院校会让学生写这种类型的申请文书，同学们首先是一脸懵逼，接着是抓耳挠腮，最后是绝望，为了能够解决各位同学的问题，今天小编会给大家讲解一下Personal History Statement个人历史陈述如何去写。

一、前言

1.认识PHS（Personal History Statement）

在开始讲解之前，我们首先要清楚什么是PHS，PHS指的是对个人曾经经历的阐述，在撰写时内容通常是偏主观。

PHS和其他申请文书的区别

就拿SOP和PHS来进行比较，它们之间就存在巨大的差异，如果你申请的学校让你写SOP，那么就不会让你去写PHS，反之，如果你的学校让你写PHS，那不好意思了，SOP会伴随左右，而且你撰写的时候还不能让PHS和SOP中的内容发生重合。不过你只要分清PHS和SOP的申请目的就能很好的发挥了，SOP通常都是比较倾向你所申请的目的，学业经历，不会涉及到你个人历史经历，而PHS则是更倾向于你自己，在描述的时候主观性比较重，需要着重去描述你自身的历史个人经历，绝对不要在其中参杂你的学业生涯历史。

写作分析

回顾你的个人经历并总结

前言中也讲了，PHS是倾向于个人经历的描述，具有很强的主观性，所以在撰写的时候，你可以从你的家庭，你的父母，以及你的成长过程出发，从中找到相对印象深刻的事件进行阐述。

最后的个人计划及规划

在PHS结尾时，需要你对自己个人未来的计划和规划进行简要的阐述，比如申请成功后，在就读期间做什么以及毕业后有哪些规划等等都可以自由发挥。

写作引导

语言精练

在描述你自己曾经个人的经历时，不要过分冗长，要直击要点，比如这段经历对你个人产生了什么深远的影响，或是往后的人生规划是哪些。

充分了解撰写PHS的初衷

在你下笔撰写之前，你应该站在学校的角度来想一个问题，学校想通过PHS在你身上了解什么，当你对这个问题了然于胸的时候，你就可以开始下笔撰写了，学校给了你这个展示自己的机会一定要好好的去把握住，让自己的PHS脱颖而出给那些教授们一个良好的印象，顺便增加自己申请的成功几率。

不要迷信各类申请文书的模板

要知道，文书是讲述自己的个人经历，而不是他人，所以不要相信那些模版能给你的申请几率加分，你需要做的就是认真的去审视自己过去的经历，用精准的语言把它们描述出来，要做到逻辑通顺、内容连贯语言简明意赅，能够使阅读者在较短的时间内充分了解到你文章想要表现和表达的东西。记住，无论是哪一类的文书形式，你都需要充分的去了解自己，认识自己，才能完整的写好。

范例展示

以下所展示的这段PHS范例讲的是撰写者个人，对于父亲曾经的经历，对自己的影响和申请者对未来是怎样规划的四个部分。

Part1. 展示了申请者本人父亲的经历

Part2. 描述了申请父亲经历对自己所产生的影响

Part3. 描述了申请本人的父亲教会了申请者本人什么道理以及这个道理对于其产生了怎样后续的影响

Part4. 阐述了申请者本人对于未来的计划以及与自己的父亲在一块都做了哪些事情

通过以上对于PHS的解释以及案例的展示，相信各位同学应该对于怎样写出一篇优秀的PHS申请文书有了一定的信心，如果你仍然不能够充分的理解PHS的写作方法，并且想要找PHS代写，那么请直接扫描右侧二维码与我们联系。

范文：

My father grew up in a very poor village, and his family was almost robbed during the Great Cultural Revolution, the most insane period in China. He walked to take college entrance examination alone, wearing a patchy pant. People laughed at him about his unrealistic. Several weeks later, my father became the first university student in his village.

What my father experienced has a great influence on me. He makes me believe the power of self-belief. Unlike many girls, I am determined to pursue what I like and make it come true. For example, I was the first one in my stringent high school to arrange boys and girls to dance together, the first one to beat boys in the tennis court, and the first one to travel to many places in China, Japan, Thailand, Europe and the United States. Most importantly, because I live in Nanjing, where Nanking Massacre happened in 1937, I did a lot of research about the history of China and Japan. I organized students at my university to visit martyrs cemetery from time to time, to inform the new generation to cherish for what we have today and make our contribution to make this world a better and more peaceful place.

Besides, my father always tells me that we should treat everyone equally and help others as much as we can. At my university, there was one girl who acted strangely and had no friends. Everyone said she was creepy. However, I knew, and I could clearly see that she need a friend and love. So no matter how other people judged her and even me, I became the first one to talk to her and have lunch with her. I wanted to prove that everyone has some ice points that were kept to themselves, but love and trust can warm them. I tried my best to let others know that this girl was one of us, and we should not treat her like a stranger. Gradually, this girl had more friends. Nowadays, her smile and laughter is everywhere now. When I talked to her now, I can see the confidence and even gratitude through her eyes. It can not better to change another’s life by what I have done, and I will continue to maximize my influence, to make more people smile.

My father and I always devotes to reaching out to many poor families in rural areas of China, where people can not afford their children to colleges. Starting from high school, I have been calling for the friends around me to write letters to students in rural and western part of China. I hope it can instill the students in those areas with hope and encouragement. Once upon a time, a girl named Sajier from Tibet mailed me a scarf made by herself. I was amazed at the pattern, through which I could feel the beauty, purification and divine of the people in the far away place. I felt that there was a fire burning inside me and a sound lingering in my ear. I strongly felt that I had the responsibility to bring such a beautiful pattern to the world and let more people know about this amazing beauty. This idea, with my past experience in my father’s fabric manufacturing company and engineering projects, supports me to pursue higher education in the United States. I hope by further study, I can have a more accurate and practical plan about approaches technology and fashion, and create a more innovative business model to establish the digital platform.